Feedback on the draft plan

Having now received the feedback on the draft plan, I now know what areas I need to expand on to add in more detail. The good news is that I don't have to add too much to the document as I was around 80% of the way there already in the draft, so what I shall be doing from here is improving on the Gantt chart, expanding on the aims for the graded unit as well as adding more clarity over what I aim to be doing for the presentation, with some source references included.